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My name is Ochbayar. I was born in 1991. I'm tall and well-Built. My eyes are brown and big. I have long brown curly hair, middle nose and full-lips. I live in UB because I came to learn in university of Information and Communication Technology. There are four of us in our family. My father is Buyandelger aged 44,My mother is Badamtsetseg aged 40, Sister is Ganchimeg aged twenty one. The person I admire most is my mom. She is kind,loving,responsible and hardworking. My mom is my life role so she is playing an important role in my life. Some nights before I go to bed, my mother talks to me about her past all stories which encourage me to try to learn new things and work hard.
My family live in Erdenet. My sister studies in high school .I was born and raised in the beautiful country which is Mongolian, that is located in the Central Asia. I finished High School there and attended ten-year. This is my fifth semester here. Now I feel more confident about myself, because I passed that courses that I have been taking and received good grades and try to do my best to keep doing it.
In people's life writing about themselves is necessary to reveal their characteristies and starting new things to their future. So I'm trying to recognize at me. I have my own ambitions. There are three valuable characteristics about my personality that you should remember: first,I'm a fast learner,next I'm an enthusiastic and hardworking employee, and finally I'm a highly creative person.
I'm a very honest and friendly person. In addition I like science, arts and music, especially classical music and I love listening very much. My favourite music is Pop. I can play basketball very well. I enjoy reading interesting books, watching action movies, hanging out with my friends. I like playing piano, playing big tennis and go to the gym. Unfortunately, I don't have much time to hanging out with my friends now, because I sacrifice my free time to learn. But it worth it in order to be proud of myself in the future and achieve my goal. I really like this school and the I have chosen this school among the others. I'm trying to do my best to study hard and to take good grades, because education is very important for me.
My personality is one of my best assests. I'am funny, outgoing and genuinly care about other people. The thing I dislike is having a hard time expressing my emotions, or letting people on what is bothering me because I assume that gives them the power to hurt me. And I don't like anyone to see me crying. I hold back a lot and I don't like that about me. I love to read Novels, one of my best novels is The Kite Runner and Remember me.
I will graduate my school very well and want to be famous and good person in my future life. Maybe I couldn't revail all about me. But It's satisfied for re-gevoring at me.
In the future I want to travel around the world. My first step was going to go to Singapore. I have heard much about the beauty of Singapore, one of four remaining true city-states in the world and one of the most famous cities in Asia. It is the smallest nation in Southeast Asia that is made by many wonderful islands. Last summer, I and my friends decided to visit Singapore, the Lion Island.
Singapore, a small island, lies at the southern and of West Malaysia. A long and narrow piece of land joins Singapore with Johore Hahru, the southern-most town of West Malaysia. Singapore is now an independent state.
The city of Singapore is extremely beautiful. It is well known for its centers of business and other activities. There are many places of interest, such as, the Tiger Balm Garden, the Botanical Gardens and Raffles Museum. There are also many important centers of learning such as the University of Singapore, Science Centre, the Nanyang University and the Polytechnic. Being a famous city, hundreds of people come every day from various parts of the world to do business or to enjoy the sights of the city. Singapore therefore has large and beautiful airports and its harbors are full of ships.
There are many night schools where people who cannot go to the day schools for some reason or other can continue their studies. And, the government of Singapore is still doing its best to make further improvements in the city for the benefit of the people. During my stay in Singapore, I went out every day with my friends to see the beautiful and interesting places and things in the city. One day we went to the Tiger Balm Garden where I saw several statues of people, animals and other strange creature beautifully made and kept. The sea near this garden makes it a pleasant place to visit. We spent almost half of the day at this place.
Another day we visited the museum where I saw hundreds of curious things preserved for scholars and others. It was indeed an education to see all those things. There is so much to learn here that every visit by any person is sure to add to his knowledge. I also visited some of the harbors and saw the large ships anchored there. The sight of the ships aroused a desire in me to cross the oceans and go round the world. I was indeed deeply impressed by activities at the harbor. Then every night, I went round the town and visited some of the parks and other places of interest. The numerous lights and the constant stream of traffic kept the city alive. I visited a few of the cinemas as well. In short, I enjoyed every moment of my stay in this famous city of Singapore.
This trip gave us some experiences about Singapore, a neighborhood of my country. I took many pictures everywhere I came. It is helpful for young people like me, who want to travel around the world to study more about the cultural of different countries.
Many people worry about Mongolian future. How it will be like it depends from us. Can you imagine what our lives in the year? Perhaps you will be living in the flying house or may be you` will be eating ready-made as robots.
By the year 2050 relation ship will have developed because computer will have become mobile. Furthermore some people will have lived in the mars so will have connected easily to mars on the other hand, maybe this technology will have negative effects for humans.
By the year 2050 education will have changed because will be using computer as more and more Robots will be teaching student. However people will be lazy because robots will be doing work. By the year 2050 will be living in a flying house. Because technology will have developed very well. However there will not populated places and there will have appeared messy situation. Although we will not worry about pollution and we will be using in comfortable houses. You should have ware fire in your in your house.
By the year 2050 there will be decreased traffic jam in cities because the will have become flying cars. Furthermore space exploration will become increasingly popular as fifty present of people will have traveled to mars. However all camp won’t have opened since people will have traveled to space. Why don’t you travel to mars and explore new space. In the future, environment will be more convenient than today to live because scientists will have invented new techniques due to nano technologies. Furthermore, people will enjoy environment as it will have become nice to live. On the other hand all things will get virtual from now since computers will have been doing all things inside of us. The best thing you can do is to use the new techniques.
By the year 2050 doctors will have determined methods to cure new diseases because scientists will be using new technology. Moreover we will be healthy.
Another big problem is air pollution as factories, cars and ger districts pollute the air there fore it cause serious problems, trees and plants are damaged. More and more people than ever before have developed allergies and breathing problems. If we don’t do something now, our cities will become impossible to live in.
Some people worry about the future, while others are full of hope and enthusiasm. I hope the things which I mentioned above will come true by 2050. Have ever think about that?
These problems are also run into our planet. An essential problem of the 21st century is world pollution. Currently the environment is so much contaminated that urgent measures should be taken. The single individual cannot be blamed for the world pollution, however every person should take care of his or her habitat. In addition, it is vital that environmental issues should be treated internationally.
Lately, many presentations, conferences and international summits are held regarding waste treatment, recycling, soil and water contamination. For sure joint efforts and consolidation can only help in the mutual war towards the environmental disaster, which is going on. For instance, governments should offer support to companies and organizations, involved in manufacturing, industry or agriculture in order to find environment friendly approaches. These could be special law regulations, recycling programs, helping courses in order to implement ISO certificates and many more.
However, the influence of individuals over environment should not be ignored. If we do not confess that our planet is our home, we will never be able to take adequately care of it. We have to contribute every day to the preservation of nature and environment. For example, always remember to save energy by switching off lamps, computers and everything that we do not use. Our next obligation is to separate waste and throw bulk only in the designated areas. Driving vehicles can also be environment friendly. For example, we have to avoid accelerating the engines too rapidly or using the air condition in the country, where it will be better to save energy and simply open the windows.
To sum up, environmental problems should be handled by local and international authorities also. Every single person should take care of environment and moreover we have to bring up our children to be conscious citizens of a clean and preserved planet.
In my free time activities are watching tv, playing computer game. I druther that watching tv. I like watching action movie. Ninja! The word itself is thrilling. It stirs the playground martial-arts hero in all of us. I’m tempted to say that no film about ninjas has ever been bad. But that would be patently untrue; some of us ninja-istas bemoan to this day the way the reputation of our favourite trained Oriental killers was sullied by the Teenage Ninja Mutant Turtles. Still, and though my aesthetic tastes generally incline me closer to seven-hour long documentations of the precise pitter-patter of acid rain on post-industrial Ukrainian landscapes, I should admit to having skipped into the screening of James McTeigue’s Ninja Assassin.
Written by Matthew Sand and J Michael Straczynski, it’s a free-ranging, CGI-enhanced and erratically constructed ninja-pudding of a drama. It begins in a Bangkok club, where a bevy of pug-ugly gangsters spit and growl, trash-talk and wave around golden guns.
When the topic of ninjas comes up, their boss laughs; he regards them as medieval fantasies. Such foolishness! Soon the room has been invaded by a slew of shadowy shapes that shift from one surface to another faster than the eye can see and sling pieces of metal that decapitate or bifurcate the tough geezers with supremely ketchupy results.
Two storylines subsequently unfold. One, set in the past, deals with the Ozunu clan, a secret society whose head (Sho Kosugi) abducts children in order to train them as demon-fighters. “You must hate all weakness!” he instructs. Some of the most riveting scenes, as in all martial arts films, show them doing push ups on beds of nails, fighting blindfolded, and being bruised into supreme master of their disciplines. However, one of them – a precociously talented boy called Raizo – runs away after Lord Ozunu allows the murder of his tender-hearted sweetheart.
The second story, mostly set in present-day Berlin, shows the grown-up Raizo (played by Korean pop star Rain) trying to escape the clutches of the clan, as well as intelligence services who seem to think he’s implicated in various political assassinations.
Love interest of a sort comes in the form of Mika Coretti (Naomie Harris), a forensic researcher who believes in him, but who comes across more like his mother than his most intended. Much more riveting is a finale when he comes face-to-face with his Lord Ozunu, a skilled torturer with a fondness for slotting his fist into wounds he himself has inflicted.
It’s easy to laugh at the mixed platter of Asian stock characters. As for the chipmunks-on-heat speed of the editing, McTeigue’s belief that bullet-speed visuals still have the power to startle as much as they did in The Matrix, and an important plotline that involves characters whose hearts are on the wrong side of their chests – absurd, absurd!
But the fight scenes are mostly great. And Rain, so dashing in Speed Racer, is something to behold. His precisely rippled and defined body is awe-inspiring.
